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영작한건데...내일이 당장 시험이라 대충 만들어서 문법이 맞는지 모르겠네요;
내용이 심히 자신감이 철철 넘치긴 하지만(부끄러움 흑흑....)
틀린 부분 있으면 알려주시겠어요?
문장자체를 뒤집어 바꿔야 할지도 모르겠지만.....
부탁드립니다 영어고수님들-_ㅜ...

A future photographer

If people who don't correctly know my real personality look at me, maybe they think I have a ordinary personality. But, actually I have a various personality. So there are so many things that I would be good at. If I had to choose one job for me, it would be photographer.

First of all, I used to deeply look at everything : view or just walking people, even if these are insignificant. So I can catch fairy good image than other people.
Second, I have a talent differently catch every cut though I shoot the photo at same place. Because I can't satisfy one photo when I shoot at first, and I carry on the work.
Finally, I like hold precious memory. So I enjoy take a picture.

Therefore, I think I would be a good photographer.

고수는 아니지만

2007/10/08

If people, who do not truly know my personality, saw me, they might think that I have an ordinary personality.
However, I actually have various personalities and interested in many things. On the other hand, if I had to choose one, I would be a photographer. First of all, I am good at looking everything deeply - either view or people who are moving, although they are insignificant. It makes me to catch fairy better images than other people do. Secondly, I can catch different cut from others though I took the photo at same places. When I am not satisfied with my photo, I never give it up and carry on the work. Finally, I enjoy taking a picture. Taking a picture helps me to hold precious memories.

영어 잘 못하는데, 그냥 살짝 바꿔봤어요. 도움되기를 바래요.

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